Monday, July 11, 2011

Extra Credit

Vitamin Water bottles always have that paragraph where they tell you something crazy but it's always funny. If you can't see it : http://www.betterfitnessdaily.com/vitaminwater-isnt-healthy/

Sorry! I thought you would be able to see it larger if you clicked on it. But the senetence is "Legally, we are prohibited from making exaggerated claims about the potencyu of the nutrients in this bottle." It has a lot more commas in the paragraph but hopefully this one works!
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  1. Mr. BJuly 12, 2011 at 2:25 PM

    All right, Katie. What's the sentence? There's a lot of text on that label!

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  2. Mr. BJuly 12, 2011 at 6:21 PM

    It works! 500 points! The delayed subject, "we," gets pushed back until after that comma. It's a short introduction, but it definitely counts!

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